So he WASN'T the test subject? The other guy was? I think thats was I got out of it. I hope so, cuz that is clever.
the main charachter was a test subject, but he was lured in there and captured because of a fake contract given to him by the guy with glasses in the flashbacks
There is only one(1) trailer to a coming soon flash that i've seen that was really well made. That was 3 YEARS AGO AND IM STILL WAITING. I hope you keep at it man.
This looks like you didn't have patience to finish your project and you just wanted to upload something for the hell of it. 1 out of 10 for Laziness! Get it together son.
not at all...i worked hard to make this...im just not that good.
We wear khaki pants and a blue shirt now. I don't think we even wear those dumb vests anymore. Lol, I wish we had security like that. FOr anyone who actually cares they DID have an entire new plan to handle Black Friday this year because of the death last year. This plan was passed down from Home Office along with a video to watch to all Wal-mart stores associates so we can avoid another incident but the whole thing fell apart at the word GO. News also got down to us that at least one store decided to close itself entirely and kick out all the customers out because it was getting out of control. Some people got hurt at mine. Customers and associates. SO, to all the customers from my store: Thank You for shopping at Wal-mart, you blood sucking, pieces of shit, pathetic, dumb-ass bitches!!!! FUCK YOU AND YOU'RE SAVINGS! lol.
It was ok
I don't think the song really fits to really complement the flash(since the song is about the betrayal between him and God and want to kill God) But it was still a pretty good flash. But it seems trippy for the sake of trip. Not trying to dumb down your flash, just critiquing a bit. Good job man.
TO S3BB Below me
Oh please GOD shut the FUCK UP and stop posting cok sucker's reviews. Shove this review up your ass.
To the animator: Great work man, I loved it, I really did. Pat yourself on the back cuz' this was awesome.
I'm not going to give you some crappy unhelpful review like cory, but here it goes. From the get-go, i figured it to be funny parody of star wars, once I seen the pic heads plastered on stick figures, I was a bit turned off, but I still went ahead and finished it. I'll be honest, it did have some funny moments and I think it you really develop it, you can have something here. Some constructive critizm though; pasting images in flash looks bland, if you want Darth Vaders face, redraw it on flash and make it yours. The jpegs take away from the it. Also if your decide to draw the head, might as well finish the body. Stick figures will only get you so far no a days and it really goes alone way for people to be impressed by your own unique style you present. And what's up with the spontanious ending? It just ended without saying good-bye, if your part 2'ing this, you need to have some resolve. You shouldn't just end it sharply and decide to pick up later. Put out more time in your flash. For what it was and it's length, I did enjoy it a bit, but there is room for a lot of improvements. best of luck to ya.
thanks for giving so much constructive criticism! and i mean it well. this is my first flash movie, well first project, and i'm no pro so i decided to take the easy way out using stick figures... i'm going to keep doing what i'm doing and keep polishing and polishing.. it's tough to do it all alone though u know. my next movie will probably need some outside help. thank you very much for even watching it though!
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